stepping stones
not bad. there were a lot of elements present here that many newcomers omit.
you had good voice-acting, an decent attempt at visual effects and sound, moving mouths, an ambiguous, but nonetheless, present plot.
keep working it. i feel like you know where you need to progess. you've got potential.
4 years old
would you have done it the same way if you had to create it again today?
there was definitely room for improvement. your screen effects weren't very effective, and the drawing could definitely be touched up. coloring could be more representative. subtitles were a bit pathetic--use your voice. flash is a multimedia...use it.
the audience's sudden immersion in this plot was a bit confusing.
author's comments cannot excuse this. if you thought it was lacking in some respects, why even submit it all? why not be proud of your work? to me, the real question would have been, do i need to re-do this to represent my skills, ideas, etc, of today? a noob could create this today, and ok, fine, but im sure you've moved up in abilities.
also, i could care less about your statistics about frames and objects at the end. what, do you want a cookie because how hard you worked? or how hard you think you worked?
do you know what "swords touching" refers to in the US btw?
i'd prefer subtitles than my voice since it fits my movies more. in my previous movies (one of them submitted in NG), i used my voiceacting.. everybody said to me not to use my voice coz it was horrible!!
second paragraph: i just like to show everything i did... not just the best thing.. some of my friends prefer my old animations more than the new ones..
i want a cookie because i worked hard!!! happy now or not??
about the "swords touching" i don't know what it is refered to in US??
entertain me
i was about to close out because of how long it took for that two frame skater to get across the screen. luckily, there wasn't much after that.
give me a background or something, you can't expect an audience to have the patience for something like that. it was pretty uninteresting, and the message not too touching/profound.
better as a youtube
im going to overlook that this may be a sensitive subject for you and critique normally.
your style was consistent and strong. informative text. i happened to like the music.
unfortunately, this piece doesn't really work as a flash. probably would have been better as a video. there was nowhere you really utilized flash in a flash-unique way. maybe give some nav menus?
i actually orginally intended to put it on youtube, but for some reason the wmm doesnt import my music, and i think flash is neater and easier to use anyways
yeah i might try that, thanks anyways
trippy
that was pretty cool. the music was a bit discordant at times, but it matched the chaos of your drawings.
it flowed very nicely. very creative.
it was cute
i liked that.
your drawing was well styled. animations were simple, yet effective. the voices were believable, and above all, it was pretty funny.
Happy new year to you too!
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come on now. do you think people come to NG looking for something like this?
big blocks of text, btw, are difficult to read on screen. especially with that darn scrolling system you came up with. break your paragraphs up into simple concise points.
your writing didn't provide much insight to the problem, and it was obvious that this was a project.
sorry bud, you asked for it.
Well no duh, i said it was a piece of crap. I made that thing 2 years ago, what'd you expect?
twas ok
it was okay. i liked how ostentatious the music came off.
you had some clever bits here and there. i don't know who you were talking about, but meh. whatevs
mildy entertaining, if only for a few seconds
it gets old quick.
good beat nonetheless.
i was trying to follow your drops with the beat, but it was kind of difficult. the beats you choose to drop the water weren't very distinct. maybe you should have timed them when they hit the ground, with a little splash animation to really signify the percussion. maybe do that with all the instruments.
nice scene you drew there. don't go to gradient crazy though. a lot of noobs see this and think its so stylized. it can be nice, but sometimes its overdone. you're borderline here.
keep working hard!
haha!
that made me smile. i loved how the "what" moved with the beat at the beginning. the drawings were sloppy, but I think you meant for that. the smilies in the back were trippy and nonsensical, but in a good way.
good work.
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